Wow! The panel layouts are great and some of the individual panel compositions are downright lovely! You've created a really strong sense of motion through the panels. The first panel on the second page is composed nicely with the fish diagonally crossing the ripples in the water. I also especially love the shot beneath the 3 fish swimming together. Great swimming action in those dudes.
Thanks, Shane! I guess I'm sweating the small stuff... I really did have some fun putting this one together.